Friday, November 13, 2026

Euripides” Heracles — The Scaffolding

Euripides' Herakles notes are here.  

Q:

Euripides “Heracles” which king of Thebes died in office allowing Lycos to steal thee crown? Who was the rightful heir? This was a “new” Lycos invented by Euripides. Did this Lycos have a back story? 

Reply:

Bruce, this is a wonderful question because Euripides’ Heracles begins with a political situation that is easy to take for granted, even though it raises an important question about the legitimacy of power in Thebes.

The short answer is that Creon was the king who had died, and his son Megara’s husband, Heracles, was the great hero whose family had the strongest claim to the throne’s protection. But the actual succession is more complicated than that, and Euripides’ Lycos is an interesting case of a playwright reshaping traditional mythology.

1. Which king had died, and who was the rightful heir?

Creon — king of Thebes

Creon was the father of Megara, Heracles’ wife. In the mythology underlying the play, Creon and his family had been displaced by Lycos, who had seized control of Thebes. Creon’s death left a power vacuum that Lycos exploited.

The succession needs a little care:

  • Creon was the previous ruler and Megara’s father.

  • Heracles was not simply Creon’s designated heir. He was a son-in-law of the royal house and a powerful defender of Thebes.

  • The children of Heracles and Megara were descendants of Creon through their mother, but they were not necessarily the automatic heirs to the throne.

  • Lycos was the usurper who held power when Euripides’ play opens.

In other words, the play is not quite a straightforward case of a king dying and his eldest son being deprived of his inheritance. It is a story about a usurper exploiting the vulnerability of a royal family whose principal protector is believed to be dead.

2. The surprising backstory: Lycos was the son of an earlier king

Here is the detail that makes Euripides’ invention especially interesting. He does not give his Lycos an entirely fabricated ancestry. Instead, he connects him to a much older Theban tradition.

The elder Lycos

According to the story Amphitryon tells in the prologue, an earlier Lycos had ruled Thebes and was married to Dirce. He belonged to a remote period of Theban mythology, before the brothers Amphion and Zethus became rulers. 

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The younger Lycos — Euripides’ usurper

The Lycos in Heracles is the elder Lycos’s son, bearing the same name. But he is described as a foreigner from Euboea. He kills Creon during a period of civic discord and seizes power in Thebes. 

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So Euripides' invention is quite specific: he creates a new dramatic character and gives him an ancestral connection to an old Theban king. The name and lineage are traditional; the younger man's seizure of the throne and his conflict with Heracles' family are the innovative elements.

3. Who was the rightful heir?

This is where I would refine my opening answer.

Creon’s son-in-law Heracles was not necessarily the rightful heir himself. The play gives us a more intriguing possibility: Heracles had plans for his sons to inherit different territories.

Later in the play, Megara recalls Heracles imagining a future in which one of their sons would inherit Thebes through her inheritance or dowry. That is important evidence that Euripides envisaged a legitimate dynastic future for Heracles’ children in Thebes. 

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The political situation is therefore:

  • Creon: the king murdered by Lycos.

  • Lycos: the new ruler, whose authority rests on killing Creon and exploiting Theban internal conflict.

  • Heracles and Megara’s sons: potential future heirs, and precisely the people Lycos fears might avenge Creon’s death and challenge his rule.

There is no need to posit a single, undisputed male heir to understand the play. Lycos is trying to eliminate the descendants and relatives who could threaten his position.

4. Why does Euripides call Lycos “new”?

Amphitryon describes him as ho kainos … archōn Lykos — approximately, “this new ruler Lycos.” The Greek word kainos can mean “new” or “novel.”

It works on two levels:

  1. Within the story: Lycos is the recently installed ruler of Thebes.

  2. As drama: Euripides is introducing a new version of the mythology, with a usurper whose backstory explains why Heracles’ family faces execution.

Modern scholarship has specifically noted that Lycos is one of the play’s major mythological innovations. 

I think that second meaning is particularly revealing. Euripides is not merely retelling a familiar story about Heracles. He constructs a political crisis that makes the hero's absence matter: the man who has spent his life defeating monsters has left his own family vulnerable to a human tyrant.

One final distinction: Lycos is not simply a random villain invented to give Heracles someone to fight. His invented genealogy, his murder of Creon, and his fear of future retaliation create a miniature political history for Thebes. That makes his threat to the family more than personal malice; it is also the logic of a usurper trying to make his seizure of power permanent.

Q:

And, of course, the Athenian audience would have loved to see Thebes, their frenemy / competitor, in a bad light.

Reply:

 Absolutely! And I think you have put your finger on a delicious possibility in Euripides’ dramatic choices.

Athens and Thebes were not merely neighboring cities. They were rivals with a long, complicated history, and an Athenian audience watching Heracles in the fifth century BCE would have brought that history into the theater.

A few things make your observation particularly interesting.

1. Thebes had a reputation problem in Athens.

During the Persian Wars, Thebes had sided with the Persians, while Athens had become famous for resisting them at Marathon and Salamis. The Thebans’ conduct gave Athenians a ready-made reason to regard their neighbors as politically untrustworthy. That reputation remained an important part of the two cities’ relationship.

2. Euripides gives us a Thebes in political disarray.

Look at the ingredients he puts onstage:

  • A king, Creon, has been murdered.

  • A foreign-born usurper, Lycos, has seized power.

  • The royal family is threatened with extermination.

  • The city seems incapable of protecting its own legitimate ruling household.

For an Athenian spectator, this could make Thebes look like a city whose political order had broken down. The contrast with Athens—the audience’s own democratic city—was potentially satisfying.

3. But Euripides does something more interesting than simply ridiculing Thebes.

The play's moral center is not the city of Athens, nor even the political institutions of Thebes. It is Heracles' family: an innocent wife, endangered children, and an elderly father trying to protect them.

And Heracles himself is the great benefactor of humanity. He returns from the underworld only to discover that his own household needs rescuing.

That creates an irony an Athenian audience could appreciate: the greatest hero in the Greek world can save other people from monsters, yet cannot prevent political evil from entering his own home.

There is also a historical complication worth remembering. Euripides' Heracles was produced during the Peloponnesian War, traditionally dated around 416 BCE, when Athens and Thebes were on opposing sides. The play's exact political intentions remain debated, so we should not assume that every Athenian spectator interpreted the suffering of Thebes as an anti-Theban joke.

But your “frenemy” description is excellent. Athens and Thebes shared a language, religious traditions, myths, and a broader Greek identity, while competing for regional influence and nursing old grievances.

And here is the question I would carry into the rest of the play: Does Euripides invite his Athenian audience to feel superior to Thebes—or does he gradually make them recognize that the same vulnerability to political violence and human suffering exists everywhere?

That second possibility is what makes Euripides so much more interesting than a playwright merely flattering his home crowd.


Q:

I’ve yet to read the full play. I know the summary, how it played out, etc., but knowing the initial scaffolding / set-up, really, really makes a difference in understanding the play and how the playwright “enjoyed” telling a story with so many nuances, that the play had something for everyone. Sort of reminds me of the great Shakespearean tragedies that would follow.

Reply:

 I think you've identified one of the great pleasures of reading the ancient dramatists: understanding the scaffolding of a play before entering the play itself. Not knowing every detail of what happens, but understanding the world the playwright has constructed, the assumptions the audience brings, and the possibilities embedded in the opening situation.

And your Shakespeare comparison is remarkably apt.

What strikes me about your approach is that you're not asking merely, What happens in Euripides' Heracles? You already know that. You're asking, What did Euripides have to work with, what did he change, and what opportunities did those changes give him?

That opens up several layers of enjoyment.

The mythological layer. The audience already knows Heracles. They know his reputation, his extraordinary strength, and his place in the Greek imagination. Euripides doesn't have to spend much time establishing the hero's credentials. He can use that inherited knowledge to surprise his audience.

The political layer. Thebes has a history, Athens has a history, and the audience brings its own prejudices and loyalties into the theater. A usurper on the Theban throne is not simply a plot device; he arrives in a city with a political identity.

The domestic layer. Before Heracles even appears, his wife, children, and elderly father are facing death. The great hero's reputation cannot protect them in his absence. The stakes are intimate before they become epic.

And the theatrical layer. Euripides knows how to manipulate the audience's expectations. He can take a familiar myth and rearrange its components so that spectators who think they know the story discover that they don't quite know thisstory.

That last point brings us to Shakespeare.

Think of King Lear. An audience familiar with the old story of Lear and his daughters would have recognized the basic material. Shakespeare's genius was not simply inventing a plot. It was finding within that plot questions about authority, family, justice, madness, loyalty, and the terrible gap between what people believe they deserve and what the world gives them.

Or consider Macbeth. The historical and legendary background gives the audience a framework for understanding kingship, ambition, and legitimacy. Shakespeare then turns that framework into a tragedy about a man who can imagine becoming king but cannot imagine living with what he has done to become one.

The playwright supplies the scaffolding; the audience supplies a great deal of the building.

There is one important difference, of course. Shakespeare's audiences encountered plays through a different theatrical and cultural tradition, and the surviving evidence doesn't allow us to assume that every Greek spectator knew every myth in detail. But both dramatists could draw upon stories and characters that already existed in the cultural imagination.

And I particularly like your word “enjoyed.” We sometimes approach classical tragedy as though the playwrights were solemn philosophers who happened to write plays. Euripides was certainly a serious thinker, but he was also a dramatist working with suspense, surprise, irony, competing loyalties, and audience expectations. He could make a familiar story do unfamiliar things.

One further thought about Heracles, without getting ahead of your reading: the very title encourages us to think that the play is about the hero. Yet the opening gives us a vulnerable household, a disputed throne, and a tyrant who has taken advantage of the hero's absence. Euripides has already created a tension between the public identity of a legendary figure and the private lives of the people who depend on him.

That's a remarkably rich starting point.

My suggestion as you read: keep the summary you already know in the background, but pay attention to how Euripides gets you from one emotional or moral position to another. The fascinating question isn't just what happens. It's why he chooses to have this happen, here, to these people, with an audience that thinks it already knows the story.

That's where the playwright's craft becomes visible.

Thursday, November 12, 2026

Grief Lessons: Four Plays, Euripides, Translated By Anne Carson, c. 2006

Grief Lessons: Four Plays, Euripides, Translated By Anne Carson, c. 2006.

 First play: Heracles. 

Summary through page 25, through line 106, link here. Link here: https://share.google/aimode/vtOcScpqPfLZB1S2R. Minor sidetrack, link here. Link here: https://share.google/aimode/V5YwGBX6G7IXfbbpk. See more of the “scaffolding” here.

Monday, November 9, 2026

Monday, November 2, 2026

Links With Regard To Etty Hillesum -- November 2, 2026

 

Etty Hillesum

The "adult" Anne Frank.

From an earlier post over at my literature blog: this softcover was packed away some years ago. 

Etty Hillesum: An Interrupted Life and Letters from Westerbork, with a foreword by Eva Hoffman, c. 1996. 
---bought another copy at a used bookstore, Portland, OR, October 30, 2026, softcover, $5.
-- Eva Hoffman, born in Poland, 1945, about the time Etty Hillesum died
-- emigrated to Canada at age 13; Harvard graduate; ultimately the pinnacle of American writing. 
More. connecting with Hunter S Thompson -- link here. Link: https://share.google/aimode/9IbLNIIdtt4LVnZaW.  
 

Saturday, October 31, 2026

The Initiates -- Étienne Davodeu

The Initiates -- Étienne Davodeu, c. 2011. A $30-book for $9.00 at used bookstore in Portland, OR. 

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The best graphic novel ever?


 

Monday, October 26, 2026

The Fuzzy and the Techie: Why the Liberal Arts Will Rule the Digital World, Scott Harley, 2017, hardcover.

The Fuzzy and the Techie: Why the Liberal Arts Will Rule the Digital World, Scott Harley, 2017, hardcover. 

The terms "fuzzy" and "techie" are used to respectively describe students of the humanities and social sciences (the fuzzies) and students of the engineering or hard sciences (the techies) at Stanford University. 

The divide between fuzzies and techies is a modern incarnation of the chasm physicist and novelist Charles Percy Snow (wiki) lamented had formed between those in the humanities and the sciences in his famous essay "The Two Cultures." 

Scott Hartley: "As a fuzzy, I have grown up in a techie world. I ahve witnessed the need for collaboration between fuzzies and techies as a child in Palo Algo, as an undergraduate at Stanford, then as an employee of Google and Facebook, and thereafter as a venture capitalist on Sand Hill Road. 

Link here. 

Chapter One: The Role of the Fuzzy in a Techie World.

 

 



Friday, October 23, 2026

Personal Poetry

October 23, 2026: on reading which start out as a discussion on poetry, link here. Link: https://share.google/aimode/YBhZTD5b5kjxpzfCv.  

Transcribed from my personal diary.

Chapter Twenty-Two:  Poetry


November 25, 2013:

Many years ago, I asked Sebastian Voigt, a German married to my very close physician friend, Ruth Robinson, the definition of poetry; he taught German in American schools.

Somewhere in my diaries, I discussed the definition of poetry, but was unable to find it today. I ran across this, however:

The first critic to affirm the originality of Wuthering Heights as a triumph of art was Sydney Dobell in a remarkable review of the 1850 edition in Palladium. Sydney Dobell saw that a prose work can be structured like a poem: ‘The thinking-out of some of these pages ... is the masterpiece of a poet’ that, like a poem, it can embody its central meanings in imagery. He claimed that successful art is that which best serves the demands of the imagination, imagination working in obedience to no external principles, but to ‘the nature within her.’ Dobell resolves the problem which had baffled nearly all the earlier reviewers by coining the phrase ‘instinctive art,’ which he applies not only to Emily Brontë, but to all writers whose art serves to release their deepest ‘powers of insight,’ ‘intuition of character,’ and ‘infallible inspiration.’  This is from my notes found at “Art of Emily Brontë.”

I noted elsewhere that when I typed the entire Virginia Woolf novel Mrs Dalloway, I noted it was a prose poem. I write about that extensively elsewhere. 

See this link. Link: https://share.google/aimode/pSLbOnNYxikaRDYWt. 

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[Undated, probably about 2004]  Periodically I return to poetry.  But when I start reading poetry, seldom do I enjoy it. I think poetry is a very personal endeavor and doesn’t “share well.”  Harold Bloom once said that “reading” is a private vocation; if so, then reading poetry is even more private.

Periodically I would like to write my own poetry; I certainly have enough experiences for subject matter.

Some thoughts
:

Pateley Bridge walk at night

The white shooting stars.
The nights so black, so quiet.
But at dusk: the horse.


The Amazon at daybreak

Small flat-bottomed boat
Cool, breezy; the still water
The broad horizon

North Dakota back roads

Tall grass. Breezy, clear.
Soaring, a hawk, an eagle.
On edge: pronghorn deer.



HAIKU



Anticipation!
Saturday morning.  So much
To do.  Gone too fast.
    -- 21 Apr 03
 

Saturday morning has always been my favorite half-day of the week.  Friday evening is a close second.  But, whereas Friday evening is an evening of “doing, Saturday morning is a time of anticipation.  Anticipation always trumps doing.  Haiku must capture a moment in time; this one does, I believe.  “Gone too fast: does not mean that the weekend goes by too quickly; it refers to the fact that the moment of anticipation quickly dissipates when thoughts of weekend chores start arriving.



Yorkshire lambs huddling
Inside sheepfold; discussing
Finite universe.
    -- 21 Apr 03


This can only make sense to those who have spent time really enjoying the countryside of northern England; and it’s even more fun for those who are cognizant of latest cosmology theories.  Once I started trying to write haiku, I knew I had to one about lambs huddling along a stone fence, trying to stay out of the cold north Yorkshire wind.    

Some of my favorite reading concerns physics and cosmology (the study of the universe -- not cosmetology which is something quite different).  I was thrilled when I came up with the third line. There is currently renewed debate among cosmologists on whether the universe if finite or infinite.  Einstein “proved” that a finite universe was impossible, but some new data suggests that a finite universe is not only possible, but probable.
   
As for sheep, the stone fence is clearly the edge of their universe.  Sheep don’t know it, but they live in a world of multiple and parallel universes.  At least that’s true in northern England.
   
And just as human are unable to se “the other side of the universe,” these lambs are not able to see what’s on the other side of the stone fence.
   
I chose lambs, not sheep, because lambs are very special for an individual who is very special to me.


Cardinal -- red hot
Best-dressed bird -- flaming, fleeting!
Like best-dressed woman.

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Cardinals -- red hot
Best-dressed birds -- flaming, fleeting!
Like best-dressed women.
    -- 22 Apr 03

    
    Definitely haiku -- captures a moment in time.  I once had the pleasure of spending time with the “best-dressed woman” at a remote overseas military site.  A local noncommissioned officer (NCO) had told her she was the best-dressed woman at that site; she was also the most feminine, sexiest, and smartest.  She told me God sent birds to watch over her.  When I returned to the states, one of the first birds I happened to see was a cardinal.  That cardinal immediately reminded me of her:  simply best dressed.


Not only drunkards
Know aspiration pneumonia.
But flight surgeons, too.
    -- 22 Apr 03

There is nothing great about this haiku.  But, again, it catches a moment in time.  While flying in the back seat of F-15s, I often got airsick and if I vomited at the wrong time, I ran the risk of inhaling my vomitus.  I only did that once to realize I never wanted to do that again.  I developed pneumonia with fever to 104 degrees for several days.  I had seen aspiration pneumonia while a student at the University of Southern California - Los Angeles County Medical Center in those who had passed out in an alcoholic stupor.  I never thought I would experience the same thing.

This was a favorite story of mine when talking to friends, so I thought I would try to capture it in haiku.  I think the Japanese reserved haiku for pleasant memories; they might be unhappy with this haiku.  In addition, I think haiku should be more universal and more about nature.  This one was neither.  

But the contrast between “Drunkards” and “flight surgeons” gives one pause to think these two have something in common.


Starry, starry night.
One in orange, one in black
Seeking streaking white.
    -- 23 Apr 03

 

Definitively catches a moment in time, and captures one of my favorite memories.

The nights were more often than not, beautiful, dark, and cloudless during my many months in England (2002 - 2003).  There was also very little light pollution in rural north Yorkshire; that lack of light pollution resulted in very dark skies and millions of stars on moonless nights.  I have always been captivated by meteors and I was surprised to see so many that summer of 2002.
    

A dear friend and I hoped for meteor-hunting conditions on our nightly walks.  We were seldom disappointed.  She always wore a bright orange waterproof coat; she was known as the woman in orange.  I wore an all-black outfit.    I couldn’t decide whether to go with “girl/boy” in this haiku, or “she/he.”  I will let someone else be the judge.  I knew it couldn’t be “woman/man.”  We were both very childlike on these walks.  Maybe for that reason “girl/boy” is the better choice.  I finally went with “one” in orange and “one” in black -- not sure if that will be final.

The rhyming (first line, third line) worked out unexpectedly; the colors (orange, black, white) also fit nicely together.  I suppose a first line could be “darkest, bluest night” which would add another color, and would have placed color in each line. And “starry, starry night” will lead to “teary, teary-eyed” for a future haiku.  (With apologies to Don McLean for “Starry, Starry Night” and Vincent van Gogh for “Starry Night.”)


Killing me softly,
Suicide is not painless,
Nostalgia.  Begone!
    -- 14 May 03

I am very, very sentimental and I definitely have mood swings from euphoria to feeling quite sad.  I have always been able to function very well, and I don’t think others have noted my depression.  However, I do know that I did not reach my potential because of my depressive tendencies.  I often thought of suicide but never followed through with any attempt, probably because of my close relationship with my family, especially my dad, and then with my own family, especially my two daughters.  Had I not had two daughters who depended upon me -- and I’m thinking more along emotional support rather than financial support - I might have committed suicide.  (In fact, financially they might be better off if I were to die while on active duty with military benefits and insurance policies.  But emotionally it would be devastating for Laura and Kiri.)
   
The three lines, of course, are taken from other sources: “killing me softly” from a Roberta Flack song; “suicide is [not] painless” from the movie Mash; and, “nostalgia.  Begone!” from Shakespeare.

Hot, hot, hot, hot, hot.
Hot, hot, hot, humid, hot, hot.
San Antonio.

Probably the easiest haiku; certainly the simplest.


Crystal water falls
Stillness of moving water.
Quiet thoughts, loud splash.


I don’t like this particular haiku; it needs to be worked but I wanted to capture the paradox of the “stillness of moving water” (a quote by Howard Nemerov I came across in the book Hydrogen by John S. Rigden).  The “stillness of moving water” reminded me of two “bodies” of water while hiking through Yorkshire:  the water falls, and the brooks / rivers.


Better?

Crystal water falls
Stillness of a silent stream.
Quiet thoughts, loud splash.

Alliteration: stillness, silent stream, splash.



Rievaulx, Fountains, all
Abbeys frozen in time.
Jervaulx, Byland, more.

Again, this needs to be improved, but I wanted to capture the thought.

The dales

Swaledale, Wensleydale, 
Arkengarthdale, Wharfedale, Nidderdale.
Airport departure.
Teary, teary-eyed (with apologies to VVG and Starry, Starry Night)

Swaledale, Wensleydale, 
Arkengarthdale, Nidderdale.
Airport departure.



Not haiku, but from my journal:

All I see is a woman in red,
Arms outstretched.
Turning in the wind,
The North Yorkshire wind.
Smiling.
Always smiling.


From Nikolas Boyle’s biography on Göethe:

Ob erfüllt sey was Moses und was die Propheten gesprochen
    An dem heiligen Christ, Freunde, das weiss ich nicht recht.
Aber das weiss ich:  erfüllt sind Wünsche, Sensucht, and Träume,
    Wenn das liebliche Kind Süss mir am Busen entschläft.

Whether what Moses and the prophets said has been fulfilled
in sacred Christ, I do not, friends, rightly know. 
But this I do know:  Wishes, desires, and dreams
are all fulfilled when my little sweetheart drifts deliciously into sleep on my bosom.

        -- Göethe, 40, after the birth of his first child, a son


Edna St Vincent Milllay, 1931, age 39

        “Love is not all: it is not meat nor drink    
        Nor slumber nor a roof against the rain,
        Nor yet a floating spar to men that sink
        And rise and sink and rise and sink again;
        Love cannot fill the thickened lung with breath,
        Nor clean the blood, nor set the fractured bone;
        Yet many a man is making friends with death
        Even as I speak, for lack of love alone.
        It may well be that in a difficult hour,
        Pinned down by pain and moaning for release,
        Or nagged by want past resolution’s power,
        I might be driven to sell your love for peace,
        Or trade the memory of this night for food.
        It may well be.  I do not think I would.”


Connecting the Dots


Sylvia Plath’s Ennui
F. Scott Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby
Henry James’ The Beast in the Jungle


July 25, 2008
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While reading Sylvia Plath’s Journals I came across “villanelles.”  I think I had heard of that term before but now that I saw the word again I was curious what villanelles were.  I went to wiki, found a short definition, and in the process of “cutting and pasting” that definition on my “Storytelling” chapter, I noted that I had not completed a sentence regarding a newly discovered poem by Sylvia Plath.

I “googled” a phrase from the incomplete sentence which took me directly to solving the nano-mystery: the lost Plathian poem was Ennui which then took me to Blackbird: An Online Journal of Literature and the Arts where I found the background of Ennui.

Blackbird appears to be a free site maintained by the Department of English at the Virginia Commonwealth University.
 

This site apparently owns the copyright or has access to much of Sylvia Plath’s works.  The site includes the text of Ennui as well as scanned copies of the original typewritten page of Plath’s.

From the web:  “Anna Journey, a graduate student at Virginia Commonwealth University, discovered a previously unpublished poem by Sylvia Plath in the archives at Indiana University.  She claims the 14-line Petrarchan sonnet, Ennui, was created from notes Plath wrote in a copy of F. Scott Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby.  The poem has been published in VCU’s online publication, Blackbird.”

The researcher, a student, came across “L’ennui” written in the margins of Sylvia’s copy of The Great Gatsby.  After reading the paragraph in The Great Gatsby, it appears Sylvia Plath responded with Ennui.
 

“Ennui” is boredom. In The Great Gatsby the female protagonist, Daisy, has just had her baby, weeping that it is a girl, weeping because she feels only men can live adventurous lives. Daisy states that a woman’s only hope in life is to be a “beautiful little fool.”  In the next paragraph, the female protagonist, who I believe is based on Zelda, the wife of Fitzgerald, was very, very bored at this point in her life.

In Ennui, does Sylvia Plath see herself as Zelda? By the time Zelda had her first (only child) she had seen in all, and is now bored, or at least she is in The Great Gatsby.  Sylvia, unlike Zelda, had not seen it all but maybe ennui/Ennui was her “Is That All There Is?”

Sylvia wrote this poem while she was at Smith College, living in Lawrence House. [From notes in her journals, edited by Kukil, Sylvia lived at Lawrence House from September 1952 until her graduation from Smith College in June 1955. She lived at Haven House during her first two years at Smith College, 1950 – 1952. It appears she spent a full five years at Smith.]

Earlier this morning I had read Faulkner’s comments on poetry in which he said it is much more difficult to write short stories than novels because every word counts more: “…it demands a nearer absolute exactitude. You have less room to be slovenly and careless…In poetry, of course, there’s no room at all for trash. It’s got to be absolutely impeccable, absolutely perfect.”

Here is Ennui:

Tea leaves thwart those who court catastrophe,
designing futures where nothing will occur:
cross the gypsy’s palm and yawning she
will still predict no perils left to conquer.
Jeopardy is jejune now: naïve knight
finds ogres out-of-date and dragons unheard
of, while blasé princesses indict
tilts at terror as downright absurd.

The beast in Jamesian grove will never jump, [The Beast in the Jungle, Henry James]
compelling hero’s dull career to crisis;
and when insouciant angels play God’s trump,
while bored arena crowds for once look eager,
hoping toward havoc, neither pleas nor prizes
shall coax from doom’s blank door lady or tiger.

This site, http://www.blackbird.vcu.edu/v5n2/poetry/plath_s/ennui.htm, has interesting links regarding Ennui.
    
Ennui has only 14 lines, one verse of eight lines, the second six. As Faulkner noted about poetry, Sylvia packs a lot into those few lines. She talks of tea leaves and gypsies; knights, dragons, and princesses. She references James and The Beast in the Jungle. She talks of God and insouciant angels. And Sylvia even references the Roman crowds eagerly awaiting tigers and Christians entering the arena.

In 14 lines:

Faulkner talked of the importance of each word in a poem: “insouciant” is the perfect word for angels: “lighthearted unconcern, nonchalance, carefree, unconcerned, undisturbed.”
    
From wiki: “The Beast in the Jungle is almost universally considered one of James’ finest short narrative, this story treats appropriately universal themes: loneliness, fate, love, and death. The parable of John Marcher and his peculiar destiny has spoken to many readers who have speculated on the worth and meaning of human life.”

Now the dots start to connect: not just my research regarding the genesis and reading of Ennui, but also the dots – the data points – in Sylvia Plath’s own young life. Henry James never married, and “possibly never experienced a consummated sexual relationship.”
    
[Incidentally, William James was the brother of Henry James. William James formulated a landmark philosophy on psychology (Principles of Psychology, 1890), a subject Sylvia was much interested in. It would be interesting to learn whether Principles of Psychology was one of the standard textbooks in her psychology classes.]

Oh, yes, villanelles. From wiki: “A villanelle is a poetic form which entered English-language poetry in the 1800s from the imitation of French models. A villanelle has only two rhyme sounds. The first and third lines of the first stanza are rhyming refrains that alternate as the third line in each successive stanza and form a couplet at the close. A villanelle is nineteen lines long, consisting of five tercets and one concluding quatrain.”

   

USE OF ALLITERATION:

Tea leaves thwart those (t’s) who court catastrophe (c’s),
designing futures where nothing will occur:
cross the gypsy’s palm and yawning she
will still predict no perils (p’s) left to conquer.
Jeopardy is jejune (j’s) now: naïve knight (n’s)
finds ogres out-of-date (o’s) and dragons unheard
of, while blasé princesses indict
tilts at terror (t’s) as downright absurd.

The beast in Jamesian grove will never jump,
compelling hero’s dull career to crisis (c’s);
and when insouciant angels play God’s trump,
while bored arena crowds for once look eager,
hoping toward havoc (h’s), neither pleas nor prizes (p’s)
shall coax from doom’s blank door lady (d’s) or tiger.



Definitions:

Hardy: “Poetry is but emotion put into measure.”  (Martin Seymour-Smith’s biography, about p. 618

From my storytelling chapter:

Poetry:  A Definition

New Yorker, 6 Nov 06, Robert Gottlieb, quoting a 1950’s publisher:  “... a freshness and liveliness of feeling, a gift for imagery, and a power of expression that were quite exceptional -- in short, a poet.”

“Poetry is the connecting link between body and mind.  Every idea in poetry is grounded in emotion.” Camille Paglia, Sexual Personae, c. 1990, p. 18.

From wiki:  Louise Bogan, 1897 – 1970; an American poet who felt that “lyric poetry” if it at all authentic…is based on some emotion – on some occasion, on some real confrontation.”

Personal thoughts:  one cannot be sentimental in novels (there can be sentiment, but the author cannot be sentimental); however, poetry is all about emotion, including sentimentality.